October 21

100 Word Challenge Week #45

Today was a special day, because I was going to a theme park for the first time ever. I was looking around and going to the arcade and playing the carnival games but then a real challenge came, the roller coaster. When I was coming here I said to myself you don’t have to go on it but I had a sudden urge to do it. So I got on and as soon as we started I regretted it. It felt like I was going to vomit over everyone below or mess up the electrical work or something.


Posted October 21, 2015 by anton2013 in category 100 word challenge, 2015, Schoolwork

1 thoughts on “100 Word Challenge Week #45

  1. antsclass

    This is a really nicely written piece Anton. It builds on a simple day at the theme park to a nice unexpected turn to give the reader a smile at the end. I’m particularly impressed with the careful attention you’ve paid to grammar and auxiliary verbs- it all sounds perfect – well done
    Ant

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